tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post1063626959947878382..comments2023-12-03T21:00:07.148-06:00Comments on Beachanny By The Sea: AMAZING GRACEBeachannyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-28776191494120433102010-10-09T13:37:37.904-05:002010-10-09T13:37:37.904-05:00oh, this has made em cry... reminded me of my late...oh, this has made em cry... reminded me of my late brother and all his suffering before he left us with all this suffering<br /><br />The poem is amazing and so is the image<br />Thanks for sahring<br />thanks for visiting<br />:)<br /><br />DulceDulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-55071434909704149652010-10-09T10:52:14.156-05:002010-10-09T10:52:14.156-05:00Tomorrow is always another day. And our lives can ...Tomorrow is always another day. And our lives can change in a New York Minute. Nice write. Love and Light, SenderAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-44264582887505740992010-10-07T13:58:30.424-05:002010-10-07T13:58:30.424-05:00Thanks to all of you for coming by and reading thi...Thanks to all of you for coming by and reading this. I always feel so sorry for the things and people that I can't help. But I know raising consciousness is a first step and maybe through our work, we can do that. You are all fine writers and I appreciate being in your company.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-78112941494877160652010-10-07T13:00:18.998-05:002010-10-07T13:00:18.998-05:00Sad truths, extremely emotional and very well writ...Sad truths, extremely emotional and very well written.... ~AprilAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-20153462605025660612010-10-07T10:42:10.644-05:002010-10-07T10:42:10.644-05:00Deep and powerful. So emotional..
ecstasiesDeep and powerful. So emotional..<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/10/ecstasies.html" rel="nofollow">ecstasies</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-71419792277871396052010-10-06T21:45:24.386-05:002010-10-06T21:45:24.386-05:00Powerful and painful.Powerful and painful.Sandra Heska Kinghttp://sandraheskaking.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-72548749292805499262010-10-06T19:56:42.900-05:002010-10-06T19:56:42.900-05:00nice oneshot
lot of emotion :)nice oneshot<br />lot of emotion :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-28456997337672120642010-10-06T19:52:56.756-05:002010-10-06T19:52:56.756-05:00Touched me very deeply this one my friend...you ha...Touched me very deeply this one my friend...you have crafted such a powerful poem here...and I thank you!! Hugs xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-41738568588910032722010-10-06T15:48:28.742-05:002010-10-06T15:48:28.742-05:00so very, very sad, but so very, very well written....so very, very sad, but so very, very well written...a great share for one shot..cheers peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-8362230067160823282010-10-06T15:20:23.223-05:002010-10-06T15:20:23.223-05:00You write from such a beautiful place of compassio...You write from such a beautiful place of compassion. May we never become immune to their pain.Belindahttp://thehalfwaypoint.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-44751627051711827392010-10-06T13:17:39.912-05:002010-10-06T13:17:39.912-05:00There are so many good lines here, but My vafoviri...There are so many good lines here, but My vafovirite is seeing "death in the faces of the poeple and in the trees." Very fine.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-56765242357555309202010-10-06T13:02:39.275-05:002010-10-06T13:02:39.275-05:00...how sweet the sound?
Haunting. When put to the......how sweet the sound?<br /><br />Haunting. When put to the song as well, it gives one shudders. Powerful, tragic, but powerful. You have looked into the gritty reality of the world, gay, and done a fine job exposing it. A sad subject, but one more people need to realize.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-80070350879071966772010-10-06T12:56:08.387-05:002010-10-06T12:56:08.387-05:00Patti and Others - I know that these hard economic...Patti and Others - I know that these hard economic times and natural disasters have put many on the streets and out of their homes. I am concerned for so many struggling at this time. I thought this young woman stood as a symbol for the struggle of trying to get back on one's feet.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-63638904520292101402010-10-06T12:45:16.819-05:002010-10-06T12:45:16.819-05:00PattiKen and the Muses.
(I'm logged in as Ano...<a href="http://pattiken-pattiken.blogspot.com/2010/10/not-your-average-love-poem.html" rel="nofollow">PattiKen and the Muses</a>.<br /><br />(I'm logged in as Anonymous because Blogger's being wonky today.)<br /><br />This is such a powerful and sad poem. To read in your comment that it is true is just heartbreaking. Beautifully written, Gay.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-17665663793007451582010-10-06T10:55:46.988-05:002010-10-06T10:55:46.988-05:00survival is at times haunting for sure! the last v...survival is at times haunting for sure! the last verse was esp. well written I felt!<br /><br />My One Shot Is HERE:<br /><a href="http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2010/10/05/the-elements/" rel="nofollow">http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2010/10/05/the-elements/</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-79917618781166992852010-10-06T10:55:37.618-05:002010-10-06T10:55:37.618-05:00Thank you all for your vivid and complimentary com...Thank you all for your vivid and complimentary comments. This was a true story. <br /><br />This young woman was put on the streets with her younger brother and her grandmother. The brother and grandmother died before a shelter saved her. I was so moved by her story I decided to try to capture it in this form. Initially I had a second part putting it in contrast to the lives my friends and I live. However, her story stood alone. <br /><br />I hope she has found the life she deserved. She was indeed a brave and noble young woman.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-23590045691109830602010-10-06T10:39:56.186-05:002010-10-06T10:39:56.186-05:00This is a powerful, gritty scene of reality, and r...This is a powerful, gritty scene of reality, and raises awareness about the kind of pain this woman endures trying to survive. The feeling is palpable. Highly effective poem. I especially love the lines "there's only so much pain she will bear on the streets." Good work.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-63666885750984538812010-10-06T10:31:30.589-05:002010-10-06T10:31:30.589-05:00haunting and true everyday...so much we do not see...haunting and true everyday...so much we do not see that goes on - how much magic will it take? that is a good question...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-79590421603811633702010-10-06T10:07:46.400-05:002010-10-06T10:07:46.400-05:00This really hurt to read - not because of the writ...This really hurt to read - not because of the writing (which is beautiful) but because of the subject matter. So many live like this...it's hard to even begin to imagine.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-82986647964616705412010-10-06T10:00:14.500-05:002010-10-06T10:00:14.500-05:00Your One Shot can be taken on many levels, Gay.
...Your One Shot can be taken on many levels, Gay. <br /><br />Let's hope 'she' finds a salvation somewhere.Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-39298196947729846962010-10-06T09:54:22.910-05:002010-10-06T09:54:22.910-05:00Gritty and beautifully written. The writing enjoya...Gritty and beautifully written. The writing enjoyable, the subject very sad.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-24797696110138755852010-10-06T09:33:29.344-05:002010-10-06T09:33:29.344-05:00Hello Gay!
You display a talent for transporting ...Hello Gay!<br /><br />You display a talent for transporting the souls, hearts, and minds of others to another place, in this case to somewhere many of us have not been...yet!<br /><br />GOOD one Shot. Thank you for sharing this....<br /><br />BTW, I have looked EVERYWHERE for the email. Any chance of a repost? fiddlemn@gmail.com<br />(That's FIDDLEMN--no "a" in word 'man' OK?-grin!steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17498524940140288735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-4262651438697191392010-10-06T03:31:40.063-05:002010-10-06T03:31:40.063-05:00greatly written Bea, and you touched a hard topic ...greatly written Bea, and you touched a hard topic with sensitive lines..nice one shot :)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-80902224709730354472010-10-06T02:30:32.224-05:002010-10-06T02:30:32.224-05:00Sadly interesting...Life is precious and should be...Sadly interesting...Life is precious and should be valued while it still exist. Nicely done.<br /><br />Cheers!Emmanuel Ibokhttp://www.lordemmanuel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-64085632887313927522010-10-06T00:38:41.736-05:002010-10-06T00:38:41.736-05:00Gay....
This was so good and so powerful.
Fantasti...Gay....<br />This was so good and so powerful.<br />Fantastic....G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.com