tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post1765961415499476546..comments2023-12-03T21:00:07.148-06:00Comments on Beachanny By The Sea: TEXTURE AND IMAGEBeachannyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-21924811111849594412011-01-04T22:38:12.577-06:002011-01-04T22:38:12.577-06:00"worn round the necks of
virgins and lumberj..."worn round the necks of <br />virgins and lumberjacks" <br />Splendidly imaginative. The effort here is plain to see and I thank you! Truly a treasure.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-6052986438542284672011-01-01T12:16:16.666-06:002011-01-01T12:16:16.666-06:00Gah, I've been wanting to get over here and re...Gah, I've been wanting to get over here and read your One Shot for four days now, but I finally made it. :-)<br /><br />"shells and rocks<br />worn round the necks of <br />virgins and lumberjacks"<br /><br />I love that line. LOVE that line!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-49220938705434496072010-12-31T18:57:25.417-06:002010-12-31T18:57:25.417-06:00Lovely write for the season and the Son...love the...Lovely write for the season and the Son...love the last few lines...a bridge that needs constant reinforcements.....have a great New Year...looking forward to a year of great poetry...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-54996816591420367472010-12-31T12:48:00.035-06:002010-12-31T12:48:00.035-06:00Fantastic!
"worn round the necks of
virgins ...Fantastic!<br />"worn round the necks of <br />virgins and lumberjacks<br />as tokens, as troths of faith <br />chiseled from hard quarried beliefs <br />lashed to the souls of believers"<br /><br />I wish you Love, Health and Happiness for the New Year!<br /><br />GioAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-26727389211721425432010-12-30T16:37:20.316-06:002010-12-30T16:37:20.316-06:00shells and rocks
worn round the necks of
virgins ...shells and rocks<br />worn round the necks of <br />virgins and lumberjacks<br />as tokens, as troths of faith <br />chiseled from hard quarried beliefs <br /><br />So deep, this one. Beautifully sculpted and worthy to be revered. Nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-8088135379431158792010-12-30T09:49:26.025-06:002010-12-30T09:49:26.025-06:00Very quietly spirtual, Gay, in the true sense of t...Very quietly spirtual, Gay, in the true sense of the word. Really nice.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-85885024457376870852010-12-29T20:44:32.651-06:002010-12-29T20:44:32.651-06:00And I hear distant chanting
this is so vividAnd I hear distant chanting<br />this is so vividDanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11159815258636417641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-85014818441003986422010-12-29T16:45:34.464-06:002010-12-29T16:45:34.464-06:00I really enjoyed this beautiful piece. ♥I really enjoyed this beautiful piece. ♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-81554086496726150882010-12-29T16:42:55.994-06:002010-12-29T16:42:55.994-06:00Quite a trek to an amazing message.Quite a trek to an amazing message.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-37949487064871986602010-12-29T12:53:24.585-06:002010-12-29T12:53:24.585-06:00Masterpiece Bea..!!!
every line is pure beauty..ha...Masterpiece Bea..!!!<br />every line is pure beauty..hats off! :)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-39696632509826157692010-12-29T09:02:11.903-06:002010-12-29T09:02:11.903-06:00gorgeous from the image (visual poetry) to the wor...gorgeous from the image (visual poetry) to the words you have hewn, and piled up into a sacred shrine.LauraXhttp://orli-shines.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-24551029551782552232010-12-29T08:24:51.956-06:002010-12-29T08:24:51.956-06:00Another beautiful poem. I like the visual shift i...Another beautiful poem. I like the visual shift in perspective from digging in the earth, to the mountains, to the sky, the galaxy, the universe. It is a wonderful flight. Then we return to the most amazing intersection of God with our world--the cross. A beautiful poem of worship! Thank you for sharing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-29019723228330824012010-12-29T03:04:03.947-06:002010-12-29T03:04:03.947-06:00wow - you made this come alive with your writing g...wow - you made this come alive with your writing gay...esp. liked the small burning white star<br />at the edge of an unnoticed galaxy<br />at the left side of the great god's...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-80974398904161584052010-12-29T00:18:43.398-06:002010-12-29T00:18:43.398-06:00See it came out just fine. You really got the flow...See it came out just fine. You really got the flow disciplined and the words did the rest of the work. Splendid writing, Gay, a pleasure to read from first to last.<br /><br />Have a safe trip, a wonderful time, and a very Happy New Year. Thanks for everything.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-12793714081880776182010-12-28T23:08:29.587-06:002010-12-28T23:08:29.587-06:00Wow..Glynn, that's a massive statement. I'...Wow..Glynn, that's a massive statement. I'm stunned beyond words.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-91955862512938937612010-12-28T22:48:29.352-06:002010-12-28T22:48:29.352-06:00I think you just sumamrized the Bible in one poem....I think you just sumamrized the Bible in one poem. Great one, Gay.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-2434983700420892032010-12-28T22:28:51.920-06:002010-12-28T22:28:51.920-06:00Hello! I was here, asking for friendship. ;) Would...Hello! I was here, asking for friendship. ;) Would you like to follow each others blogs? Advance Happy New Year. :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-84795649382192471642010-12-28T21:51:45.595-06:002010-12-28T21:51:45.595-06:00amazing! love it!amazing! love it!Hopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-67130105754170999432010-12-28T21:43:25.471-06:002010-12-28T21:43:25.471-06:00Wow this is art, words like paint.Wow this is art, words like paint.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-39110271536510849882010-12-28T21:28:43.311-06:002010-12-28T21:28:43.311-06:00I owe a debt of gratitude to Joy Jones for keeping...I owe a debt of gratitude to Joy Jones for keeping me on track with this one. She kindly looked at not one, but three drafts of it. She's a generous and genius person.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-45637349962108360862010-12-28T21:16:21.568-06:002010-12-28T21:16:21.568-06:00Thank you all. The end was difficult to write; tha...Thank you all. The end was difficult to write; thanks for the input. Many words were considered for it.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-41915018883778431912010-12-28T20:58:21.618-06:002010-12-28T20:58:21.618-06:00two favorite line...virgins and lumberjacks...and ...two favorite line...virgins and lumberjacks...and your close...cross of sulture he was sent to bridge...very nice...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-54943601967423773122010-12-28T20:50:57.508-06:002010-12-28T20:50:57.508-06:00Wow! Your well-chosen lines read like a stream-of-...Wow! Your well-chosen lines read like a stream-of-conscious piece traversing earth and beyond through literal and figurative leaps of faith. Very powerful descriptions and symbolic connections.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-73825796891645974182010-12-28T20:50:50.754-06:002010-12-28T20:50:50.754-06:00Beautifully disciplined stream of consciousness wi...Beautifully disciplined stream of consciousness with many allusions to other texts. I especially loved this image: "chiseled from hard quarried beliefs<br />lashed to the souls of believers".Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-46123684662796113442010-12-28T20:45:45.427-06:002010-12-28T20:45:45.427-06:00Oh me too, dear Leslie, everyone has been so welco...Oh me too, dear Leslie, everyone has been so welcoming. I feel as though I've known you guys for years. It's amazing, isn't it? <br /><br />Oh thanks for coming by and reading. This was a hard earned one. <br /><br />I am driving tomorrow. It did rain today. Hoping for clear skies on the road south. Talk to you when I arrive tomorrow night.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.com