tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post2213774665719059263..comments2023-12-03T21:00:07.148-06:00Comments on Beachanny By The Sea: THE TRIP OUTBeachannyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comBlogger38125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-60278356513241244202011-09-18T18:35:29.802-05:002011-09-18T18:35:29.802-05:00This is a complete story unfolding. Nice job on th...This is a complete story unfolding. Nice job on this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-21338658875899850642010-09-03T20:48:11.099-05:002010-09-03T20:48:11.099-05:00Loved this one..almost like a song :)
sujaLoved this one..almost like a song :)<br />sujasujahttp://serenemusings.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-17673292369952954242010-09-02T17:24:11.000-05:002010-09-02T17:24:11.000-05:00I had fun reading this, wonderful ride and here yo...I had fun reading this, wonderful ride and here you were saying you're not good at writing, you're :)Wild Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05260455210731142858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-54804099071072799772010-09-01T20:05:53.306-05:002010-09-01T20:05:53.306-05:00written like a writer
I enjoyed every person's...written like a writer<br />I enjoyed every person's taleSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-68585309617179441052010-09-01T19:47:07.579-05:002010-09-01T19:47:07.579-05:00@desk49 I love that - a poem for a poem, beautiful...@desk49 I love that - a poem for a poem, beautifully said, tight and apt. Just the ticket. Thanks for coming by.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-56150710570531440942010-09-01T19:45:24.493-05:002010-09-01T19:45:24.493-05:00A ride through time
along the way
snap shots of li...A ride through time<br />along the way<br />snap shots of lives<br />on a given day<br />shared moments of <br />what new friends say<br />Home ward bound<br />or going awaydesk49https://www.blogger.com/profile/05795159954019523527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-28558351725318461732010-09-01T19:09:05.358-05:002010-09-01T19:09:05.358-05:00Oh all this praise--makes me want to put up Texas ...Oh all this praise--makes me want to put up Texas Girls. But I'll wait awhile. I have some new stuff for next week.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-41317298194685259412010-09-01T18:21:17.059-05:002010-09-01T18:21:17.059-05:00Thanks for the trip through Texas...
This absolute...Thanks for the trip through Texas...<br />This absolutely Rocked!G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-38144867366742797832010-09-01T16:18:41.383-05:002010-09-01T16:18:41.383-05:00you really paint people in this, friend. well done...you really paint people in this, friend. well done.Mommy Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09989213786947802537noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-86162723838959331082010-09-01T14:31:40.414-05:002010-09-01T14:31:40.414-05:00Great story, felt like I was right there.Great story, felt like I was right there.SuziCatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04025931724313344438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-60936400048824870212010-09-01T13:57:06.708-05:002010-09-01T13:57:06.708-05:00See what happens when you talk to people! Thanks f...See what happens when you talk to people! Thanks for dropping by to read my <a href="http://meawriter.wordpress.com/2008/11/05/saying-goodbye" rel="nofollow">poem</a>. Hope your week goes wellJohn (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-39034751272711623102010-09-01T12:50:41.207-05:002010-09-01T12:50:41.207-05:00thanks for taking us with you on this trip!thanks for taking us with you on this trip!Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-83114448750031920002010-09-01T12:27:44.627-05:002010-09-01T12:27:44.627-05:00Enjoyed this bus ride and all the little tales :)Enjoyed this bus ride and all the little tales :)Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-89597527513346179682010-09-01T11:41:55.549-05:002010-09-01T11:41:55.549-05:00Thanks guys. Glad you liked it.
It was one of th...Thanks guys. Glad you liked it. <br /><br />It was one of those "on the road" things..just my take on it. <br /><br />Ah Pete, sorry your first note didn't go up. Wish you could bring your family here and I'd show you the state. Amarillo, my home town is as different from Port Aransas where I live now as Houston is from where you live. I have seen every little bit of Texas except the Big Bend, but that's my next road trip. I'll put up pictures when I go.<br />Thanks for stopping by!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-73712679723026420292010-09-01T09:20:05.468-05:002010-09-01T09:20:05.468-05:00Amazing story on the long long road...Amazing story on the long long road...Dulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-88950096654054140672010-09-01T07:52:00.919-05:002010-09-01T07:52:00.919-05:00Isn't Texas, and things Texas unique? Loved i...Isn't Texas, and things Texas unique? Loved it.....annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-22949610189923671842010-09-01T06:36:21.657-05:002010-09-01T06:36:21.657-05:00oh no.i just wrote a huge comment and it didnt tak...oh no.i just wrote a huge comment and it didnt take!!!!!..i loved the tale, first and foremost, beautifully crafted and well told that put me in a place i have longed to visit...you see my friend i have a heck of a lot of family that live in El Paso and Dallas...the road trips my dad has been on sounded very similar...you sure wrote great!!!!cheers peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-70450543982342470512010-09-01T04:03:52.895-05:002010-09-01T04:03:52.895-05:00I was on that bus with you looking at the 'fin...I was on that bus with you looking at the 'fine white smiles on the rich black faces'.Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-80706919634337925222010-09-01T01:19:58.782-05:002010-09-01T01:19:58.782-05:00I enjoyed this so much - glimpses into other lives...I enjoyed this so much - glimpses into other lives, the sharing of tidbits that fascinate, the short and shared intimacy of a bus ride to a shared destination where everyone scatters. You have a keen eye and a keen ear and a lovely writing voice.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-53708836596593859902010-09-01T00:23:33.602-05:002010-09-01T00:23:33.602-05:00Glad I could come along for the ride. Thank you fo...Glad I could come along for the ride. Thank you for visiting my blog.KBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02621937316200868307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-35983181101505244762010-08-31T23:43:08.583-05:002010-08-31T23:43:08.583-05:00Thanks to all above; actually these were true stor...Thanks to all above; actually these were true stories and I'm the kind of traveler who draws out stories. I don't try either. I just get the greatest tales on all my journeys. Probably has to do with 'going solo' but I think this was my first solo trip after college. Thanks for the approval; it's probably not a defined poem, but not a short story either. I don't know what you call this stuff, but I have written a fair amount of it. Thanks again.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-53142932578687236572010-08-31T22:28:29.332-05:002010-08-31T22:28:29.332-05:00Dearest Beachanny,
You got me at the Greyhound co...Dearest Beachanny,<br /><br />You got me at the Greyhound coach - and your story mingled with my memories...ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-56570980189041674892010-08-31T22:15:36.277-05:002010-08-31T22:15:36.277-05:00That is some travelogue -- and it does make you wo...That is some travelogue -- and it does make you wonder about the people sitting across the aisle on a bus, a train, a plane -- and what their stories are. Each of these people int he poems would have their own full-length poem. Nice one.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-86583959505211756442010-08-31T21:31:32.623-05:002010-08-31T21:31:32.623-05:00This sounds like home. You really nailed it.This sounds like home. You really nailed it.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-82062451507674737852010-08-31T21:17:29.155-05:002010-08-31T21:17:29.155-05:00THat was too beautiful..loved it,touched Bea! love...THat was too beautiful..loved it,touched Bea! lovely one shot :)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.com