tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post2217168689758452108..comments2023-12-03T21:00:07.148-06:00Comments on Beachanny By The Sea: Two Tied Triolets - Evolution of a DanceBeachannyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-68160368029344034152012-03-15T20:48:13.240-05:002012-03-15T20:48:13.240-05:00Loved this Jenne. Thank you for posting it. I'...Loved this Jenne. Thank you for posting it. I'm gathering up my little musical poems and adding dance ones to go with. Have no idea what I'll do with them, nor anything else. My inspiration is on the wane, and I only hold on to a thought for a minute these days. Well let's call it spring fever and hope it moves on when we have to turn on the a/c. Love the ones I've been reading on your blog lately. They seem inspired.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-22842178685873512432012-03-15T20:45:59.361-05:002012-03-15T20:45:59.361-05:00Thank you Emmett. These were written to go with S...Thank you Emmett. These were written to go with Sam's article on Triolets.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-18551070044482069762012-03-14T19:53:12.944-05:002012-03-14T19:53:12.944-05:00Beautiful! Love the diction and syntax of your ver...Beautiful! Love the diction and syntax of your verse.emmett wheatfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-77774699788159215202012-03-14T14:40:20.178-05:002012-03-14T14:40:20.178-05:00These are exquisite, pulsing-- this makes me think...These are exquisite, pulsing-- this makes me think of this sonnet:<br /><br />mire los muros de la patria mia<br />si un tiempo muertes ya desmoronados<br />de la carrera de la edad cansados<br />por quien caduca ya su valentia.<br /><br />I saw the walls of the fatherland<br />at one time dead, now crumbled<br />exhausted by the gallop of the age<br />and thus their valor fallen.<br /><br />Sali me al campo-- vi que el sol<br />bebia desde los arroyos el hielo destacado<br />y del monte quejosos los ganados<br />por quien hurto su luz al dia.<br /><br />I went out to the field-- I saw that the sun<br />drank the detached ice from the arroyos<br />and that from the mountain the cattle complained<br />to the one that stole their daylight.<br /><br />Entre en mi casa: vencida de la edad <br />fue mi espada<br />y no halle ningun cosa que no ricuerda de la muerte... <br /><br />I went inside; conquered by the age<br />was my sword<br />and I didn't find anything that wasn't a reminder of death.<br /><br />I don't remember who wrote this sonnet-- and certainly your poems speak to the vibrancy of latin culture-- I remember being spellbound by the stories of the conquistadores coming into New Mexico... xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-34726829235022510662012-03-11T17:40:08.490-05:002012-03-11T17:40:08.490-05:00Flamenco is such a passionate dance, this is a lov...Flamenco is such a passionate dance, this is a lovely dance of words.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-63559942673430155322012-03-10T08:03:01.063-06:002012-03-10T08:03:01.063-06:00Oh my, these are both beautiful, so melodic!Oh my, these are both beautiful, so melodic!Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-64492380138384539822012-03-09T16:36:23.070-06:002012-03-09T16:36:23.070-06:00These are so marvelous. I would not be able to sel...These are so marvelous. I would not be able to select my favorite, and will enjoy them each more than once, most definitely!Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-51139314943462915182012-03-09T13:52:04.415-06:002012-03-09T13:52:04.415-06:00You need to see LATCHO DROM,
and learn more about ...You need to see LATCHO DROM,<br />and learn more about gypsies<br />and flamenco.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-11130839884411619152012-03-09T13:51:18.245-06:002012-03-09T13:51:18.245-06:00The bells at wrists and ankles,
the bright skirts,...The bells at wrists and ankles,<br />the bright skirts, blouses, the<br />handmade shawls, the flower<br />in the hair, the cleavage, the<br />pounding feet; all here worked<br />in superbly with the triolet form;<br />two fine pieces.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-52789350774675410442012-03-09T13:04:19.346-06:002012-03-09T13:04:19.346-06:00Both are great, Beachanny! A lot of things Mexico ...Both are great, Beachanny! A lot of things Mexico to know here!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-23947765939871455152012-03-09T09:10:40.305-06:002012-03-09T09:10:40.305-06:00Wow...not only was I enchanted by your poetry, but...Wow...not only was I enchanted by your poetry, but I also learned so much. What a treat.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-66081480607201913612012-03-09T03:20:18.203-06:002012-03-09T03:20:18.203-06:00Both beautifully wrought and full of the mystery o...Both beautifully wrought and full of the mystery of Flamenco.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-10197186300497039082012-03-09T01:46:41.043-06:002012-03-09T01:46:41.043-06:00what a culture and vivid piece of work here. I enj...what a culture and vivid piece of work here. I enjoyed both of your entries.The bold colors, blog back ground brought your words into focus.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-65667395833763513082012-03-08T22:43:49.559-06:002012-03-08T22:43:49.559-06:00first Paco and now these !!!...you certainly are i...first Paco and now these !!!...you certainly are in Flare mode today...so good !<br /><br />I need some huevos rancheros pronto :-)<br /><br />PeaceRDhttp://worldcoloredglasses.wordpress.com/2012/03/08/severed/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-61768185226712374492012-03-08T21:57:15.913-06:002012-03-08T21:57:15.913-06:00Wonderful images and beat found here, love it!!Wonderful images and beat found here, love it!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-16590748151669917322012-03-08T21:25:10.737-06:002012-03-08T21:25:10.737-06:00Well this absolutely SUNG to my Aztec roots, I lov...Well this absolutely SUNG to my Aztec roots, I loved the expression and they way you allowed the spirit and dance of the culture to come through in the form. Really impressive work! ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-17720970564911268412012-03-08T21:19:52.047-06:002012-03-08T21:19:52.047-06:00Great beats here. Stamping and heels. But I have...Great beats here. Stamping and heels. But I have to say I like the navel of the moon! K.Manicddailyhttp://manicddaily.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-30496098684298470542012-03-08T21:01:29.114-06:002012-03-08T21:01:29.114-06:00Very cool... I really liked how, in the first trio...Very cool... I really liked how, in the first triolet, you ever so slightly changed the last word in each repetition of the line. That's so confidently done, and effective.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-7134721147209244982012-03-08T20:02:11.191-06:002012-03-08T20:02:11.191-06:00These are both lovely!These are both lovely!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-6072087576782310362012-03-08T19:58:26.705-06:002012-03-08T19:58:26.705-06:00Wow! I am so impressed! Musical and lovely verses...Wow! I am so impressed! Musical and lovely verses!<br /><br />Hah! "Navel of the Moon!" Beautiful~<br /><br />Lady Nyo... who could not attempt such a form if her life depended upon it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-22975301364553610492012-03-08T17:48:51.767-06:002012-03-08T17:48:51.767-06:00Gay these are really cool. Really like the flamen...Gay these are really cool. Really like the flamenco piece quite a bit, a really unique tone here, definitely enjoyed. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-62286089710229731642012-03-08T17:33:02.370-06:002012-03-08T17:33:02.370-06:00I will be watching lots of dancing this weekend. I...I will be watching lots of dancing this weekend. I especially like the first triolet, Gay.<br /><br /><a rel="nofollow">http://lkkolp.wordpress.com/2012/03/08/look-out/</a>Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-67731093017375809082012-03-08T17:13:29.737-06:002012-03-08T17:13:29.737-06:00I didn't know that that was the meaning of ...I didn't know that that was the meaning of 'Mexico'...very cool..and love that line. Enjoyed both of these triolets and could almost hear the stomping energy of the flamenco dancers...wonderful.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-53572062592593145562012-03-08T16:12:27.004-06:002012-03-08T16:12:27.004-06:00Dreamscapes lost in the navel of the moon -> ...Dreamscapes lost in the navel of the moon -> is a great line<br /><br />and i didn't know that flamenco was not originally spanish. cool.zongrikhttp://zongrik.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-89321855300374997132012-03-08T15:48:23.646-06:002012-03-08T15:48:23.646-06:00"lost in the navel of the moon" ... I lo..."lost in the navel of the moon" ... I love this line! What a fantastic place to be lost.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com