tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post4697918951058844615..comments2023-12-03T21:00:07.148-06:00Comments on Beachanny By The Sea: Another CountryBeachannyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comBlogger41125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-21914863516082176782013-09-17T08:05:32.460-05:002013-09-17T08:05:32.460-05:00This sweeps me away.... such a wonderful mixture o...This sweeps me away.... such a wonderful mixture of romance and that easy jazzy feel.... My advice? Always stick with Carolina pines....!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-30884959382350134862013-09-14T07:08:08.524-05:002013-09-14T07:08:08.524-05:00I can very much identify with this, as a floor sit...I can very much identify with this, as a floor sitter for whom certain words would have been taboo--you bring in such wonderful particular and telling details - all so captivating and sweet. Thanks. (This is Karin - Manicddaily on wordpress.) Thanks also for your great prompt. k. Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-84012455450686291712013-09-14T05:56:03.421-05:002013-09-14T05:56:03.421-05:00Ain't that what jazz is about - saying all tho...Ain't that what jazz is about - saying all those taboo things without words? Fabulous read, Gay.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-7645269199196627042013-09-13T21:40:54.982-05:002013-09-13T21:40:54.982-05:00You've created music through sheer word craft....You've created music through sheer word craft. Jazzy poetry all along! Brilliant shot Gay!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-20572534967558927252013-09-13T17:45:15.507-05:002013-09-13T17:45:15.507-05:00Oh, lots of jazz here...Starting from onions (adva...Oh, lots of jazz here...Starting from onions (advantage of jazz poetry over jazz)...but we can eat and listen with our ears like shells...uuu - what a sound...humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-38509556622647422202013-09-13T14:13:02.502-05:002013-09-13T14:13:02.502-05:00Poinciana ... one of my first albums! Wow! I am ...Poinciana ... one of my first albums! Wow! I am so glad that you came by my blog! And this open is Jazz itself. I really enjoyed it. I think that I am just bowled over that we enjoyed the same things at the same time. It has made my day!Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-24228626329013843172013-09-13T12:11:33.598-05:002013-09-13T12:11:33.598-05:00Wow...you took this prompt to a whole other level!...Wow...you took this prompt to a whole other level! Amazing piece.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-77264377132463003572013-09-13T11:16:04.427-05:002013-09-13T11:16:04.427-05:00Now that's excellent. I'm there, sitting o...Now that's excellent. I'm there, sitting on the floor...!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-68995927288932516642013-09-13T09:55:42.671-05:002013-09-13T09:55:42.671-05:00As I read this, I found myself transported to an o...As I read this, I found myself transported to an outdoor jazz concert. Great piece!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-18344258288923569562013-09-13T07:45:13.590-05:002013-09-13T07:45:13.590-05:00ooooooooooh JAZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!ooooooooooh JAZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10094116226854880072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-18889758492483863482013-09-13T06:13:04.179-05:002013-09-13T06:13:04.179-05:00What a revelation.
And the combination with this m...What a revelation.<br />And the combination with this mellow sound is just wonderful<br />And...oh yes: that image!<br />A superlative post and an inspired prompt, Gay. Thank you so much.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-8940444179067473052013-09-13T02:10:30.852-05:002013-09-13T02:10:30.852-05:00Calypso in the hammers...you know your Jazz ;) I&...Calypso in the hammers...you know your Jazz ;) I've always like Jamal's music. Thanks for sharing Gary!Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-28746620255886720812013-09-12T22:21:14.195-05:002013-09-12T22:21:14.195-05:00Now this is what I call a very Cool jazz poem...ra...Now this is what I call a very Cool jazz poem...rarely can one capture music in words and you have with this one...like the way you seamlessly incorporated the song titles.Excellent!Just a little disappointed to miss out on those whispered words in your shell pink ear. Taboo is my favourite perfume!:)Cressida de Novahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00169216942864690995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-14645298766010200182013-09-12T22:00:17.153-05:002013-09-12T22:00:17.153-05:00wonderful Gay. you captured the beat, and the Beat...wonderful Gay. you captured the beat, and the Beat!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-34277341731673234042013-09-12T21:09:30.890-05:002013-09-12T21:09:30.890-05:00Amazing, Gay... and I love your Jazz prompt!Amazing, Gay... and I love your Jazz prompt!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-51980126971684284132013-09-12T21:05:28.493-05:002013-09-12T21:05:28.493-05:00Love the easy, romantic flow and contrast of marti...Love the easy, romantic flow and contrast of martiniNewYokParis to bootlegCarolinaPines.author.nara.malonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07159847596372441526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-92233238283059985542013-09-12T20:47:44.170-05:002013-09-12T20:47:44.170-05:00loved the titles woven in, found words, and the ci...loved the titles woven in, found words, and the cinnamon scent wafting through the coolHisFireFlyhttp://hisfirefly.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-68721165881604228742013-09-12T18:48:12.369-05:002013-09-12T18:48:12.369-05:00Oh, Gay, this sizzles! Love the combined words, an...Oh, Gay, this sizzles! Love the combined words, and the last stanza took my breath away. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-27771605698230207212013-09-12T17:58:54.029-05:002013-09-12T17:58:54.029-05:00Well, he sure got the rhythm & blues ~ Love t...Well, he sure got the rhythm & blues ~ Love this part: <br /><br /> dreamed martiniNewYorkParis<br /> you said no just bootlegCarolinaPines<br /> I heard the calypso in the hammers<br /> and Poinciana on an island<br /> breeze Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-3953464457298852772013-09-12T17:56:35.342-05:002013-09-12T17:56:35.342-05:00Immaculate atmosphere is achieved here by your pit...Immaculate atmosphere is achieved here by your pitch perfect diction and phrasing. I heard the music in your words. Thanks again for the excellent and inspiring prompt.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17392858163745232319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-13272937216687738032013-09-12T17:51:14.210-05:002013-09-12T17:51:14.210-05:00You've captured the sensuality of jazz and wha...You've captured the sensuality of jazz and what it can do to the listener. Wonderful prompt, Gay. Wish I had more time to spend on it. Hopefully in a future post.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-63328672442518236492013-09-12T17:09:33.712-05:002013-09-12T17:09:33.712-05:00Thank you everyone - I'm pumped by your words....Thank you everyone - I'm pumped by your words. I'm so happy this resonated with you guys.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-67687253379048124592013-09-12T16:59:14.236-05:002013-09-12T16:59:14.236-05:00This very special work in jazz--poem, painting, mu...This very special work in jazz--poem, painting, music, is a masterpiece, Gay.<br />Thank You!steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-80364435330615052172013-09-12T16:50:17.878-05:002013-09-12T16:50:17.878-05:00The way you use words is a pleasure. I just like r...The way you use words is a pleasure. I just like reading this with no thought to whatit says- just mouthing the words.Debi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-58293136707659255062013-09-12T16:36:38.571-05:002013-09-12T16:36:38.571-05:00wow!!! I dig this poem so much!
You have an imagi...wow!!! I dig this poem so much!<br /><br />You have an imagination like no other. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com