tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post7103311143030017418..comments2023-12-03T21:00:07.148-06:00Comments on Beachanny By The Sea: Swift SongBeachannyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-89719442476471146762012-06-30T12:23:32.127-05:002012-06-30T12:23:32.127-05:00Wonderful, Gay. High flying. k.Wonderful, Gay. High flying. k.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-57962923132005025832012-06-30T09:53:08.538-05:002012-06-30T09:53:08.538-05:00Beautiful flow, lovely imagery, and you threw off ...Beautiful flow, lovely imagery, and you threw off the shackles of form with style.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-87481262087693905602012-06-30T07:27:54.480-05:002012-06-30T07:27:54.480-05:00omg that is awesome gay..i really like what you di...omg that is awesome gay..i really like what you did with the form...i love me some nature as well...interesting on the saliva...err...haha...good to see you writing...smiles..Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-22868801442161280722012-06-30T07:27:14.015-05:002012-06-30T07:27:14.015-05:00I like the nest building and sweet dreams ~ I no...I like the nest building and sweet dreams ~ I noted the different first line horizontally and vertically ~ Flows smoothly like it wasn't written for the form ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-45349388897733723122012-06-30T07:18:19.372-05:002012-06-30T07:18:19.372-05:00Just lovely - a beautiful storyJust lovely - a beautiful storyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-15599403448745444032012-06-30T02:26:35.436-05:002012-06-30T02:26:35.436-05:00wonderful poem gay, i agree with sam..it flows or ...wonderful poem gay, i agree with sam..it flows or flies beautifully.. and also some interesting footnotes...nature makes my mouth stand wide open at times..in disbelief and wonder..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-17888444849073033172012-06-30T01:30:05.362-05:002012-06-30T01:30:05.362-05:00Excellent work - I tried and gave up :)Excellent work - I tried and gave up :)marousiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12925164210601407878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-61034922742467699042012-06-29T23:37:19.048-05:002012-06-29T23:37:19.048-05:00This is a wonderful, wonderful poem, even without ...This is a wonderful, wonderful poem, even without realizing the Carroll square surrounds its structure. Nothing feels forced, everything flows beautifully.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-89735965228044747572012-06-29T21:45:51.366-05:002012-06-29T21:45:51.366-05:00Nicely done as well, you also were able to turn a ...Nicely done as well, you also were able to turn a line, which I think is greating crafting. There's soul to this.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-34565345641624710662012-06-29T19:16:39.225-05:002012-06-29T19:16:39.225-05:00Fantastic! I love the alliteration and sound.
T...Fantastic! I love the alliteration and sound. <br /><br />This is excellent: "Full leaves latched among sweet dreams<br />Of all bound things"rosemary minthttp://rosemarymint.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-12337298190164588072012-06-29T18:44:13.183-05:002012-06-29T18:44:13.183-05:00Beautifully done..love how it begins with the nest...Beautifully done..love how it begins with the nesting and ends with flying free.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-40882048310873267212012-06-29T18:04:57.676-05:002012-06-29T18:04:57.676-05:00It takes lots of efforts to do this,I'm sure. ...It takes lots of efforts to do this,I'm sure. Very nicely done! I tried but didn't finish it. Nice verse Gay!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.com