tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post8314981807093564797..comments2023-12-03T21:00:07.148-06:00Comments on Beachanny By The Sea: Follow the WindBeachannyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-8026286809229206912013-08-27T14:02:10.480-05:002013-08-27T14:02:10.480-05:00Feeling fate on your faces - what a line! So good,...Feeling fate on your faces - what a line! So good, the whole poem reads so well!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-44393461925096063402013-08-26T12:52:09.614-05:002013-08-26T12:52:09.614-05:00This is beautiful, evocative, and speaks volumes a...This is beautiful, evocative, and speaks volumes about a life lived together. It was so wonderful to see you at Chromapoesy, I always value and appreciate your feedback. I have missed you.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17392858163745232319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-8595566889051613452013-08-26T00:59:48.905-05:002013-08-26T00:59:48.905-05:00Am learning a new form today and I love the play ...Am learning a new form today and I love the play here which perfectly explains what is happening in this whimsical painting and I like that you mentioned the lion's pointy hat!Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-25990067934004846682013-08-26T00:15:53.591-05:002013-08-26T00:15:53.591-05:00Love it! We seem to always be in the chaseLove it! We seem to always be in the chaseSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-3835756735174938522013-08-25T20:49:06.127-05:002013-08-25T20:49:06.127-05:00Reminds me of the sad sage and the happy fool, but...Reminds me of the sad sage and the happy fool, but its possible that the philosopher got that the younger the wiser as opposed to being learn-ed. I often think of those days when I let myself be led to the party, but took my own bike to ride there in the wind.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-45293979632937508592013-08-25T17:43:22.230-05:002013-08-25T17:43:22.230-05:00We always chasing something or someone...never sat...We always chasing something or someone...never satisfied....humans :)humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-70162820418116950662013-08-25T15:16:28.487-05:002013-08-25T15:16:28.487-05:00Feeling fate on our faces -- such a beautiful line...Feeling fate on our faces -- such a beautiful line. Sometimes that is a pretty strong headwind too! Very cool that you were also make into a Fibonacci. k. Manicddailyhttp://manicddaily.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-89325888955358241352013-08-25T12:33:38.830-05:002013-08-25T12:33:38.830-05:00(Sam's just a cat who pretends or maybe thinks...(Sam's just a cat who pretends or maybe thinks he IS a lion!)Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-13934092759883688772013-08-25T12:22:11.410-05:002013-08-25T12:22:11.410-05:00I would love a lion in a party hat... love the fib...I would love a lion in a party hat... love the fibonacci and how you connected it to the picture... a happy poembrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-5249390097261903692013-08-25T11:41:10.892-05:002013-08-25T11:41:10.892-05:00Yes, this last line really sums it all up! No mat...Yes, this last line really sums it all up! No matter what we must keep pedaling on<br />our circle of life~<br />I loved the Zero!<br />YOU are so clever~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-12381450735497147042013-08-25T11:16:19.273-05:002013-08-25T11:16:19.273-05:00brilliant ~ Mbrilliant ~ MAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-1098836685389582702013-08-25T10:22:17.729-05:002013-08-25T10:22:17.729-05:00very fine piece. the closure is epic!very fine piece. the closure is epic!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-13543823363661431242013-08-25T10:19:09.256-05:002013-08-25T10:19:09.256-05:00Hi Joy - well I just wrote my second 55 the other ...Hi Joy - well I just wrote my second 55 the other day and thought I'd like to do more. I counted the words in the fibonacci starting with the first 1 and realized I was a word short and that's what gave me the idea of beginning with zero. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I've missed you. I did buy the book (Gemini/Scorpio/Capricorn) the other day and look forward to spending more time with three of my favorite poets. Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-87681989751176445962013-08-25T09:25:07.501-05:002013-08-25T09:25:07.501-05:00Very creative, Gay, especially including the zero,...Very creative, Gay, especially including the zero, which threw me off at first, but worked charmingly.I especially like that you ventured into that long last line--there was no feeling of awkwardness to it at all--it seemed just the right length for what you had to say, which means you have mastered yet another form here, I think. I also like the poem as a poem very much, with its poignant sense of childhood left behind in the relentless gale of life. Thanks so much for participating with us at The Garden.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-29417386037162518332013-08-25T09:17:07.092-05:002013-08-25T09:17:07.092-05:00Love this so much. Especially love that last line...Love this so much. Especially love that last line.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-12710682211664787962013-08-25T08:38:15.500-05:002013-08-25T08:38:15.500-05:00I love the little lion in his party hat! You have ...I love the little lion in his party hat! You have managed to tell a fine story within the confines of a very tight form. Kudos.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-5888874605038058372013-08-25T07:41:57.606-05:002013-08-25T07:41:57.606-05:00Ah, yes......time slips the pavement and all thing...Ah, yes......time slips the pavement and all things change. I can definitely identify with that. I enjoyed your 'fib.'Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-62216037180914061642013-08-25T07:21:01.205-05:002013-08-25T07:21:01.205-05:00Zero day, I love those moments when time slips awa...Zero day, I love those moments when time slips away ~ Lovely work on the form too Gay ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-34527881801245524942013-08-25T06:57:49.850-05:002013-08-25T06:57:49.850-05:00time slips the pavement and all things change...wh...time slips the pavement and all things change...what an interesting line to me...things happen so fast, things we never see coming...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-23889788422932766022013-08-25T03:45:15.944-05:002013-08-25T03:45:15.944-05:00Great fibonacci poem, Gay! It provides a refreshin...Great fibonacci poem, Gay! It provides a refreshing respite from the other's. '..Chasing them and all things change!.. Nicely!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-69535545298604728932013-08-25T03:29:02.034-05:002013-08-25T03:29:02.034-05:00Really nice Fibonacci, I love feeling fate on our ...Really nice Fibonacci, I love feeling fate on our faces & time slips the pavement...great lines. It has a wonderful whimsical childlike feel just like the picture.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-6024106455316060422013-08-25T03:20:36.053-05:002013-08-25T03:20:36.053-05:00cool work on the fibonacci gay and also cool take ...cool work on the fibonacci gay and also cool take on judith's image... there's so much between the lines - it feels as if whole story books live there and wait to be opened and read...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com