tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post8602675839434548379..comments2023-12-03T21:00:07.148-06:00Comments on Beachanny By The Sea: Sonnet For a GranddaughterBeachannyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-64757482768171817132013-07-31T21:29:49.024-05:002013-07-31T21:29:49.024-05:00Your granddaughter must be so proud to have you wr...Your granddaughter must be so proud to have you wrote this for her. Lovely!Cressida de Novahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00169216942864690995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-30877447746807413732013-07-25T17:56:25.673-05:002013-07-25T17:56:25.673-05:00Beautiful granddaughter, beautiful poem, Gay. So g...Beautiful granddaughter, beautiful poem, Gay. So good to "see" you.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-28765625336449814252013-07-25T00:12:54.502-05:002013-07-25T00:12:54.502-05:00So beautiful ...So beautiful ...Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-62911035382232452622013-07-24T21:17:23.363-05:002013-07-24T21:17:23.363-05:00Thanks K. A little taxing to get myself back into ...Thanks K. A little taxing to get myself back into the groove, but I do love seeing and reading everyone!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-22521937942166961372013-07-24T21:16:13.199-05:002013-07-24T21:16:13.199-05:00I'm hoping so tomorrow. I talked to her this m...I'm hoping so tomorrow. I talked to her this morning and she had a pretty full day planned. :)Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-11131616057172049142013-07-24T20:53:00.104-05:002013-07-24T20:53:00.104-05:00A very pretty poem for a very pretty girl. She is...A very pretty poem for a very pretty girl. She is like rose quartz only so much softer. I especially like your last line in which the verbs like flourishes can almost be read as nouns. So interesting. Thanks. Glad you are settling back into your writing life. K. (This is Karin - Manicddaily. wordpress.). k. Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-78764849848871179212013-07-24T20:32:26.347-05:002013-07-24T20:32:26.347-05:00She's a lovely lass, Gay! Wonder if she gets t...She's a lovely lass, Gay! Wonder if she gets to read this!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-74503278093998165922013-07-24T19:38:39.198-05:002013-07-24T19:38:39.198-05:00LovelyLovelyKatie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-69535577359338982562013-07-24T19:37:52.021-05:002013-07-24T19:37:52.021-05:00What a beautiful tribute to your granddaughter! ~p...What a beautiful tribute to your granddaughter! ~peace, JasonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-6994013984034345672013-07-24T19:20:25.403-05:002013-07-24T19:20:25.403-05:00This made me smile, beautiful!This made me smile, beautiful!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-7996624079934995892013-07-24T16:48:37.168-05:002013-07-24T16:48:37.168-05:00A beautiful poem for a beautiful girl. And I als...A beautiful poem for a beautiful girl. And I also hear you when you say<br /><br />" I close my eyes and think of you; I am young<br />like you. The world is fresh, ever-changing;<br />a sea of tomorrows we are meant to explore."<br /><br />Time passes way too fast, WAY too fast.<br />Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-55806872165871762522013-07-24T15:25:29.420-05:002013-07-24T15:25:29.420-05:00Thanks - it's the place for the volga. It'...Thanks - it's the place for the volga. It's not any of the traditional sonnets but fashioned after Neruda's. Without form yet still in fourteen lines. Appreciate your comment!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-75236687275501402272013-07-24T15:16:47.081-05:002013-07-24T15:16:47.081-05:00lovely. I like the turn -- line 9 -- "I am yo...lovely. I like the turn -- line 9 -- "I am young..."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-40999659298161216252013-07-24T14:59:29.472-05:002013-07-24T14:59:29.472-05:00I'm sure she'll love. It's wonderful....I'm sure she'll love. It's wonderful. Thanks,Waltermarkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619428258264938946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-78063726556657447582013-07-24T14:40:16.655-05:002013-07-24T14:40:16.655-05:00smiles...i hope she reads this and sees the beauty...smiles...i hope she reads this and sees the beauty you see in her...its not an easy age...made me smile gay...fly on now...smilesBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-11940718184619973862013-07-24T14:20:45.576-05:002013-07-24T14:20:45.576-05:00Thank you both for your comments and for reading. ...Thank you both for your comments and for reading. She turns seventeen (17) today and yesterday I celebrated seventy-one (sigh) 71 - it's our palindrome birthday! Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-74448057214583303462013-07-24T14:11:27.572-05:002013-07-24T14:11:27.572-05:00Such a lovely poem, Gay. May your granddaughter al...Such a lovely poem, Gay. May your granddaughter always feel honored by your words.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8943152373837433678.post-78549254234227864582013-07-24T13:36:11.386-05:002013-07-24T13:36:11.386-05:00ah she's beautiful gay - and you find such ten...ah she's beautiful gay - and you find such tender words to describe her - and i just love that last part as well when you close your eyes and connect with her.. flying through cherry tree forests...sounds wonderful - love itClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com