These shards of a mirror
once hung above our mantle.
We dwelled there intermittently
until stepping through, you broke it.
Cracked parts of faces passing by,
flashbacks of us, standing.
Abstract shades in impressionist colors;
expressions, shapes of noses, arms
toes entering shoes, the back of
your neck, pieces of our lives--
us, nude or dressed for the theater;
ready for work, closing the door.
The cats played through its time and space
not marring the smiles and smirks and jeers
of visitors who spoke their history in past tenses,
posing such absurd pretenses. Our knowing
smiles became an archway to possibilities.
Days of bright, glittering ambitions;
last checks before work and meetings.
Reflected nights by glimmering votives
when silvered sheets shrouded burning need,
in the mirror passions cooled to glass.
Broken objects now, never aging,
still as the disconnected stereo.
A shelf of cracked memories,
now distorted cubist pieces, just
memories in a gilded frame.
Throwing out the shattered bits
forces recognition of change;
The broken likenesses alter our
reality as well as all my dreams.
(c) Gay Reiser Cannon * All Rights Reserved
wow.. "The broken likenesses alter our
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Love that ending Gay!
The mood, imagery, voice - all so well sustained, Gay. Those last two lines, as Anthony suggests, are deeply thought-provoking. Wonderful write.
ReplyDeleteyou spin it well gay..i hate to sound like a broken record but your last two lines tip the scales...whew.
ReplyDeleteyour writing is exceptional...with the very first verse i knew this is a poem i must read many times...each time picking up another one of the broken pieces from shattered moments...as if each moment becomes its own eternity..."cracked parts of faces passing by, flashbacks of 'us', standing...the analogies you've used to convey your feelings are simply brilliant.
ReplyDeleteAn able and intense poem, Gay-- I love the concept here of what the mirror holds/has known-- this is one that pierces me. BTW thanks so much for your supportive comment the other day. xxxj
ReplyDelete*sigh* For such a softly spoken piece, it carries such emotional weight. Nicely done, Gay.
ReplyDeleteSo many perspectives of a cracked mirror! Especially loved the cubist connection!
ReplyDeleteI love this poem. This was beautifully done!
ReplyDeleteSad ... Cracked mirror ...broken dreams- well written!
ReplyDeleteso sad but so well written gay - i like how you bring the emotions to the reader with this one...delightful
ReplyDeleteVery sad, thought-provoking write. Excellent right to the end.
ReplyDeleteI had an early comment here but it disappeared ... Love the synecdoche of broken mirror, jagged memories and shattered dreams. You handled it deftly and fluidly. - Brendan
ReplyDeleteYes reality does shift from time to time altering the state of emotions with that shift
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone for these comments. I wrote this a while ago. This week has been a turbulent one and fairly busy. I liked this but the emotion was quite strong at the time of the write; now it's a half forgotten vagary. I thought it served as a reminder that reality and time sometimes does make dramatic shifts as budh.aaah said above and I think I'm going through another shift in my life again. They come as suddenly as the breaking of a mirror and often last as long as seven years before another one comes along. Again thank you for coming by and commenting. Gay
ReplyDeleteBrendan I hate it when I lose your comments almost as much as I hate having mine lost on other blogs. Thank you for taking the time twice!
ReplyDeleteThe bits and pieces of house and home, all by-standers to life. Nice poem, Gay. :)
ReplyDeleteI agree Gay--those shifts are almost imperceptible at first, like the passions somehow cooling to glass above--but they affect us profoundly, and change our reality into memories with their new one. This is a strong, fine piece, however distant you may feel from it now, and wholly genuine. My great pleasure to read it.
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broke it.
What the mirror witnesses and sees is an evocative thought. This is a poem that needs to be read more than once. (and that's a good thing).
Nice poem. Very impressive and real deep. Guess I will come back and read it a couple of more times.
ReplyDelete"in the mirror passions cooled to glass"
ReplyDeletea truly wonderful phrase and concept. and a truly brilliant poem!
"The broken likenesses alter our
reality as well as all my dreams."
wow!
This is such a 'complete' poem, Gay. It is solid and ethereal at the same time...and there is so much in there...phrases, thoughts, inferences....it is astounding.
ReplyDeleteI love your work. I always feel 'filled' when I read your poetry.
Lady Nyo
Ah, so real, so lovely-- "Broken objects now, never aging," really grabbed me.
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