rough hewn
gnawn from roots
or tree carved
affixed at right angles
stood aright
where roads intersect
at the centers of towns
above places of prayer
making maps of sky
pointing through woods to
coasts piled with sand
shells and rocks
worn round the necks of
virgins and lumberjacks
as tokens, as troths of faith
chiseled from hard quarried beliefs
lashed to the souls of believers
their inner voices shaped
by seers and dowsers
treading tortuous furrows
digging planting kneading
to evince from earth
something more clear than
the melted snow streams
flowing down exalted mountains
where finite life waits
on this tiny satellite
of a small burning white star
at the edge of an unnoticed galaxy
on the left side of the great god's
galloping universe where he sent
some attachment of himself once
who couldn't avoid the pitfalls
of men's foibles though he left
tablets of his love on every surface
he himself expired on that cross
of cultures he was sent to bridge
(c) Gay Reiser Cannon * All Rights Reserved
Artistry with words. I see the textures and cultures and then a man with a mission
ReplyDeleteMasterfully conveyed
So glad you are on the team - yeah
MOONIE hugs
Oh me too, dear Leslie, everyone has been so welcoming. I feel as though I've known you guys for years. It's amazing, isn't it?
ReplyDeleteOh thanks for coming by and reading. This was a hard earned one.
I am driving tomorrow. It did rain today. Hoping for clear skies on the road south. Talk to you when I arrive tomorrow night.
Beautifully disciplined stream of consciousness with many allusions to other texts. I especially loved this image: "chiseled from hard quarried beliefs
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Wow! Your well-chosen lines read like a stream-of-conscious piece traversing earth and beyond through literal and figurative leaps of faith. Very powerful descriptions and symbolic connections.
ReplyDeletetwo favorite line...virgins and lumberjacks...and your close...cross of sulture he was sent to bridge...very nice...
ReplyDeleteThank you all. The end was difficult to write; thanks for the input. Many words were considered for it.
ReplyDeleteI owe a debt of gratitude to Joy Jones for keeping me on track with this one. She kindly looked at not one, but three drafts of it. She's a generous and genius person.
ReplyDeleteWow this is art, words like paint.
ReplyDeleteamazing! love it!
ReplyDeleteHello! I was here, asking for friendship. ;) Would you like to follow each others blogs? Advance Happy New Year. :D
ReplyDeleteI think you just sumamrized the Bible in one poem. Great one, Gay.
ReplyDeleteWow..Glynn, that's a massive statement. I'm stunned beyond words.
ReplyDeleteSee it came out just fine. You really got the flow disciplined and the words did the rest of the work. Splendid writing, Gay, a pleasure to read from first to last.
ReplyDeleteHave a safe trip, a wonderful time, and a very Happy New Year. Thanks for everything.
wow - you made this come alive with your writing gay...esp. liked the small burning white star
ReplyDeleteat the edge of an unnoticed galaxy
at the left side of the great god's...
Another beautiful poem. I like the visual shift in perspective from digging in the earth, to the mountains, to the sky, the galaxy, the universe. It is a wonderful flight. Then we return to the most amazing intersection of God with our world--the cross. A beautiful poem of worship! Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeletegorgeous from the image (visual poetry) to the words you have hewn, and piled up into a sacred shrine.
ReplyDeleteMasterpiece Bea..!!!
ReplyDeleteevery line is pure beauty..hats off! :)
Quite a trek to an amazing message.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this beautiful piece. ♥
ReplyDeleteAnd I hear distant chanting
ReplyDeletethis is so vivid
Very quietly spirtual, Gay, in the true sense of the word. Really nice.
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ReplyDeleteworn round the necks of
virgins and lumberjacks
as tokens, as troths of faith
chiseled from hard quarried beliefs
So deep, this one. Beautifully sculpted and worthy to be revered. Nicely done.
Fantastic!
ReplyDelete"worn round the necks of
virgins and lumberjacks
as tokens, as troths of faith
chiseled from hard quarried beliefs
lashed to the souls of believers"
I wish you Love, Health and Happiness for the New Year!
Gio
Lovely write for the season and the Son...love the last few lines...a bridge that needs constant reinforcements.....have a great New Year...looking forward to a year of great poetry...bkm
ReplyDeleteGah, I've been wanting to get over here and read your One Shot for four days now, but I finally made it. :-)
ReplyDelete"shells and rocks
worn round the necks of
virgins and lumberjacks"
I love that line. LOVE that line!
"worn round the necks of
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Splendidly imaginative. The effort here is plain to see and I thank you! Truly a treasure.