Fog horns and train whistles fill the night.
Their calls signal departure dreams that cancel
nesting instincts wrapped in homespun schemes.
Soft feather falls and quiet fails
to quell those yearning travel needs.
Faint images dissolve to exotic scenes
conjured from celluloid fantasies.
Drifting between the sea of sheets
and the ocean breeze fog, you're blown
into Shanghai or rounding Africa's Cape.
Those bacon breakfast smells submerge
in sleep as a market in Algiers, when
shadows shift and a dark station, seen as
black and shiny points, emerges from the mist.
Above the rail tracks, a ladder entices you
to the wagon-lit where whistles blare.
You're east outside a wayside gare
where clocks appear out of nowhere
and the clatter gets faster as
tunnels give way to mottled light
when
a piercing shrill scream forces today
to wake to the sameness of yesterday
(c) Gay Reiser Cannon * 2011
nice I feel like I was in a sleeper car...floating across the landscape inhaling the passing of time and place....very nice...bkm
ReplyDeleteOh, what a lovely ode to an escape! If only in my head.
ReplyDeletefantasies between the sheets and bacon...well you are certainly speaking my language gay...ha. would love to take a long train trip where there were sleeper cars...have only taken shorter trips...hmm...
ReplyDeleteVery good poem...it say's to me about the longing of adventures, the monotony of everyday living...I enjoyed this very much. Thanks Gay :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully said for any traveler. Where you in transit while writing?
ReplyDeleteA lovely floaty feeling here at the beginning, segueing seamlessly into the rattle of the tracks, the jostling of image upon image in the stream that flies past the window, then the drop to earth in the final lines. Many of our best adventures happen while asleep. An excellent poem, Gay.
ReplyDeleteTravel in any guise is welcome in my world. This is lovely...the images rushing by... I love it, Gay. Thank you.
ReplyDelete~brenda
Oh wow. To travel on such a far-flung and sensual journey, only to end up back at the starting point!
ReplyDeleteA lovely poem. I like that the intense imagery forced me to read it slowly. Each line a new tangent, layered, disconnected and connected; just the way sleep juxtaposes impossible things.
ReplyDeleteWow, your dreamer sure gets around ... even though she didn't leave your pillow. Great cartography of the 4-D dreamscape, everywhere and nowhere at once. - Brendan
ReplyDeletelove - love - love the flow of this gay...it reads like the exploding colors colors in the picture..i love train rides and spent many a nights on sleep wagons with the rattle of the rails..love it
ReplyDeletehaunting dreamy flow of images
ReplyDeleteThanks y'all especially for linking, posting and coming by to read Steven's excellent article on free verse and to read my effort for the week. When I am having difficulties as I have been lately in finding words, I play with pictures. I downloaded some fractal programs and have been having some fun starting there and then layering them with other things. Can't say if it's pricked my imagination in other ways but it helped me "lose myself" for a while. I think that's what I was after in this piece too. I love travel almost more than anything else. When I don't have one planned, I seem to fantasize about them waking and sometimes even sleeping. Hope you enjoyed the journey.
ReplyDeleteI am enjoying all the posts you've put up, too, this Monday. Thank you again.
I'm a picture person, and words are often a poor substitute for the images that cross my brain in the middle of the night. So I completely understand every dreamy step down these stairs, from the trains to ships to bacon to clocks to finally waking up and having it all fade away to a blaring alarm clock once you plod downstairs to consciousness. Dig it! :D
ReplyDeleteOh my.. after a long day at the office I came home to this lovely read.. you had me from the first line on this magical journey via rail.. I immediately recalled a scene from a movie I adore "Out of Africa"...
ReplyDeleteso many fine lines here..
well done!
This does have a lovely, floaty drift until the end jars you back to reality. Fabulous piece.
ReplyDeleteWhat a sleepy drift in and out of metaphor.
ReplyDeleteI loved it.
What a lovely floaty, sensual feeling. Very nicely done!
ReplyDeletemottled light should be the name of that abstract art.
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